Writing: narrative!

WHAT: We have started writing narrative stories. 

The first week we wrote about when a cat wanted 

To be a dog he was bored with his life.

SO WHAT: ( the photo ) 

NOW  WHAT: I can improve on finishing it earlier 

Than I did this time.

Thinking on the spot.

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My island One Motu

Triple fun zone

I think it's going to be really fun.

To play around in the triple fun zone.

I think it's going to be really fun to play around in the triple fun zone.

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Writing

 
What: Because i corrected my words and I finished
the hole thing.


So what : I have achieved my astle goal.


Now what: I need to do more correcting.

So What: ( photo)

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