Friday, 15 August 2014

Writing: narrative!






WHAT: We have started writing narrative stories. 
The first week we wrote about when a cat wanted 
To be a dog he was bored with his life.

SO WHAT: ( the photo ) 

NOW  WHAT: I can improve on finishing it earlier 
Than I did this time.

Wednesday, 30 July 2014

Thursday, 3 July 2014

Tuesday, 24 June 2014

Writing




 
What: Because i corrected my words and I finished
the hole thing.


So what : I have achieved my astle goal.


Now what: I need to do more correcting.